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Nothing is left of that shell
Without your name you fail
That anesthetic glint in your eyes
Drowned in the spoils of war
Floating below your reality

Where are you now?
Left without a word
To your existence betrayed
Your soul fled
Now you are done for

Stuck behind the skin
Of water your prison of light
Fear, your captor
What choices have you now?
Repent, a slave to yourself
©2008 ~BlackFireCat
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My opinoin on those who give up on themselves. I have a sew friends who I worry about. One in particular whom I love dearly. She knows what to do, but I am afraid that she gave up on herslef already. It makes me want to smack some sense into her if it would do her good, but I know it wont. I am tired. I want people to believe in themselves, even if it is just a little bit.

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~Sahna:iconSahna: May 19, 2008, 9:47:58 PM
I hear yah. And at the same time this reminds me of the anime Spiral XD

Really awesome poem, liz. I like the "anesthetic eyes" line

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